Rajon Rondo Picking Up Technical Foul vs Hawks |
Article Written By Aiden Woodworth
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Rajon Rondo Ejection/Suspension
April
29, 2012- It is the Boston Celtics vs Atlanta Hawks in the first game of the
first round of the NBA Eastern conference playoffs. It is a close game and the
Hawks crowd is going wild. The Celtics have the ball. All of the players have
sweat beading off of them. The Hawks are up by four points and the crowd is
chanting “de-fense, de-fense”. Rajon Rondo brings the ball down the court and
gives it to Brandon Bass. Bass is unable to hold onto the ball and it rolls
away. Bass and Josh Smith come together in an attempt to get the ball. After
both of them collide the referee calls a foul on Brandon Bass. Rondo is furious
at the referee. Rondo wanted a jump ball. He stomped over to the referee and
began yelling at him. The referee quickly makes the “T” sign with his hands
signaling a technical foul. Rondo is now furious and approaches the referee
even closer. He comes to the referee and bumps the referee with his chest. The
referee again does the “T” sign and Rondo is kicked out of the game for having
two technical fouls. The Hawks crowd begins cheering, whooping and hollering
because the Celtics star point guard is out of the game.
Josh
Smith then goes to the foul line and makes both free throws. The crowd goes
nuts and begins to cheer as loud as they can. The final score was 83-74, the
Atlanta Hawks beat the Boston Celtics. Later the NBA reviewed the Rondo foul
and suspended Rondo for game 2 of the Hawks vs Celtics playoff series.
I
asked some seventh grade students a few questions. I first asked, “What was
your reaction to the Rondo ejection?” Here is what some of them said, “It was
stupid on Rondo’s part.” - Jonah H. “I thought it was weird and stupid.” -
Dylan W. “I was completely baffled.” - Drew T. I also asked, “Do you think
Rondo deserved to be suspended?” Michael M. said, “Yes, who does that to a
referee?” “Yes because he yelled at the referee a lot and did the chest bump.”
- Lewis J. “Yes.” - Thomas S. Finally I asked, “On a scale of one to ten with
ten being the most knowledgeable, how much did you know about the Rondo
incident?” Two seventh graders answered 1, two other seventh graders answered
eight, and one seventh grader said 9.
The
playoffs are always hard fought and intense. The players just have to know how
to keep their cool in these situations. It is hard though when you have 10,000+
people constantly yelling and cheering around you. You really have to be calm
though when your team is down by four, with a minute left in the game, with
everything on the line.
Aiden, good job with demonizing Rajon. Your frame would be stronger if you weaved your quotes into the rest of the story you told, especially in the first paragraph.
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